Section 1
Dangling Modifiers
Definition
Any modifying word, phrase, or clause that does not clearly or sensibly modify a word or word group in a sentence is a dangling modifier.
Explanation
A dangling modifier is a descriptive phrase without a clear word to modify, so it just 'dangles' and creates confusion. To fix this, you must add the missing subject or rewrite the sentence. Remember, a modifier isn't dangling if it describes an understood subject, like the implied you.
Examples
- Dangling: Riding in an air-conditioned car, the hot sun was barely noticeable.
- Correct: While we were riding in an air-conditioned car, the hot sun was barely noticeable.
- Dangling: Exhausted and thirsty, the locker room looked welcoming.
- Correct: Exhausted and thirsty, the team found the locker room welcoming.
- Dangling: Peering under the edge of the sofa, the library book was found.
- Correct: Peering under the edge of the sofa, I found the library book.